murray

1) I would say that he really took his time into his revising and editing of his writing and did it very carefully so that it would be effective. I do not really do that well I do but I do not go into depth with it like murray does and that is probably what I would change. I do plan before I write but to the extent that he does.

3) she was surprised that so much time went into these stages of the writing process. She also learned that the 2 are very similar in many ways. she realizes that it makes sense for murray to write this way.

4) the time management for the revising and editing processes. Berkenkotter says that you should spend more time editing and revising than you do actually writing the paper.